Writing Traits Rubric |
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IDEAS AND CONTENT |
ORGANIZATION |
VOICE |
WORD CHOICE |
TRAIT DESCRIPTORS |
The overall effectiveness of:- ideas, details, examples; - whether the reader's
interest has been captivated and maintained; - degree to which the response achieves the intended purpose. |
The degree to which the response:- is focused; - is clearly and logically ordered;
- is coherent; - provides closure; demonstrates connections. |
The degree to which the writer:- has chosen a voice appropriate for the topic, purpose, and
audience - demonstrates commitment to the topic; - writes with expression, engagement, and sincerity. |
The degree to which the response:- reflects the effectiveness and accuracy of the words or
expressions selected and utilized by the writer; - employs a broad range of developmentally appropriate words. |
ADVANCED |
- Narrow, manageable topic;- Relevant, specific details go beyond the obvious; - Strong evidence
of knowledge or experience about topic; - Fresh, original, insightful ideas. |
- Inviting introduction, satisfying conclusion; - Thoughtful transitions;- Logical, effective sequencing; - Pacing well-controlled; - Structure matches purpose and audience. |
- Individuality shines through; - Rich, passionate, sincere, engaging writing.- Strong commitment to topic. - Causes reader to think and react. |
- Words evoke strong images;
- Striking words and phrases throughout text;- Rich, effective, natural, precise, and vivid language; - Figurative language may be used; - Specific, accurate vocabulary. |
PROFICIENT |
- Topic focused; - Supporting
details impact purpose;- No critical ideas missing; - Evidence of knowledge or experience about topic; - Purpose maintained. |
- Purposeful introduction and conclusion; - Deliberate transitions;- Logical sequencing, but may be predictable or sequential; - Flow of sentences supports main ideas. |
- Clear point of view; - Text
reflects confidence;- Shows commitment to topic; - Sense of audience apparent. |
- Specific, varied vocabulary appropriate to purpose and audience; - Writing communicates clearly;- Risk-taking in language may be attempted. |
PARTIALLY PROFICIENT |
- Broad topic with some direction; - General observations reflected; - Reasonably clear ideas; - Support attempted, but limited; - Writing generally on topic, but
purpose not sustained. |
- Recognizable introduction and conclusion; - Ineffective or obvious transitions;- Inconsistent pacing; - Re-ordering needed in places; - Placement of details may be ineffective.
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- Point of view vague or inconsistent; - Sincere, but not spirited;- Inconsistent commitment to topic; - Occasionally engages audience. |
- Adequate, functional vocabulary, often lacking flair or originality; - Little evidence of revision or refinement of words;- Vocabulary may be imprecise at times. |
LACKS PROFICIENCY |
- Topic lacks focus; -
Generic information;- Little elaboration; - Purpose vaguely stated or incomplete. |
- Writing begins and ends without engagement or closure; - Few transitions;- Pacing leaves gaps; - Main purpose not fulfilled. |
- Point of view unclear; -
Shows little individuality.- Lacks commitment or emotion; - Inappropriately personal or impersonal. |
- Repetitious and inaccurate vocabulary; - Generic words used;- Predominantly safe, easy to spell words. |
UNSATISFACTORY |
- Topic or purpose not defined (everything seems equally important); - Limited or unclear information;- Disconnected, random thoughts; - No clear sense of purpose. |
- No identifiable introduction or conclusion; - Confusing or missing transitions;- Pacing awkward; - Organizational problems hide main point or purpose. |
- No point of view evident; -
No sense of involvement, commitment, or purpose;- Mismatch for audience and/or purpose. |
- Vague, limited vocabulary;- Incorrectly used language (parts of speech, meaning). |